Queen Bee!!
Once a pod of time there lived a lady called Queen Bee her real name was Sophia she was brought up from a rich family and they loved bees. They could even talk to them and they talk back. But one day she went on her phone and saw a email it was from her mother and farther (they said they weren't coming home for another few days and that the bees food is quite a lot of money so here is $4,000 to get the bee food and the rest you can do what you want with it Love from your presents) so she got her money from her bank account and went to the Pet shop she took her Lamborghini. (10 minutes later) She is at the Pet shop she got the bee food and saw seven female Bees and she had to get them she ask the pet shop keeper how much were they and see said they were $1,000. Then Sophia said she will get them for that price. (10 minutes later) she got home and she was feeding the Bees and then she nerd a knock.(knock knock) she opened the door and it was her best friend Ella she was here to give her some cages for her Bees. To be continued……….
Maddi - great to see you having interesting creative writing ideas - what valuable bees! Kepp up your great writing!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of creative writing Maddie. Perhaps next time you could add in some punctuation and paragraphs. Otherwise keep up the good work!
ReplyDeletegood job Maddi I really enjoyed your storey but I found a spelling mistake but I relaly enjoyed itfrom maia
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